http://tinyurl.com/2dsgvcf I don't feel sure that I've finished this one. My wife likes it but I need more critique. I hope you like it. By the way, I sneaked another Sinfonia in without posting about it here. http://tinyurl.com/2cvkcx8 -- On the flip-side, BennyG
"Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message news:-september.org... > http://tinyurl.com/2dsgvcf > I don't feel sure that I've finished this one. I like the mood of the piece. My only gripe is the 1-5-ocatve thing gets stale after a while. It needs a "hava nagila" type beat to kick it in gear at some point! >My wife likes it but I need more critique. Well, if the wife likes it I'd leave it Or change it and save the song under a different name > By the way, I sneaked another Sinfonia in without posting about it here. > http://tinyurl.com/2cvkcx8 Nice! Poly
polymod wrote: > > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message > news:-september.org... > > http://tinyurl.com/2dsgvcf > > I don't feel sure that I've finished this one. > > I like the mood of the piece. My only gripe is the 1-5-ocatve thing > gets stale after a while. It needs a "hava nagila" type beat to kick > it in gear at some point! Yep. I know what you mean all right. It is easier to deal with when played expressively on a piano. > > > My wife likes it but I need more critique. > > Well, if the wife likes it I'd leave it > Or change it and save the song under a different name > American Sahara REDUX has been under way for days. > > > By the way, I sneaked another Sinfonia in without posting about it > > here. http://tinyurl.com/2cvkcx8 > > Nice! > > Poly Thanks Poly. The points you make mean a lot. -- On the flip-side, Ben
"Benjamin Goldman" <> wrote in message news:-september.org... > polymod wrote: > > > > > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message > > news:-september.org... > > > http://tinyurl.com/2dsgvcf > > > I don't feel sure that I've finished this one. > > > > I like the mood of the piece. My only gripe is the 1-5-ocatve thing > > gets stale after a while. It needs a "hava nagila" type beat to kick > > it in gear at some point! > > Yep. I know what you mean all right. It is easier to deal with when > played expressively on a piano. > > > > > > My wife likes it but I need more critique. > > > > Well, if the wife likes it I'd leave it > > Or change it and save the song under a different name > > > > American Sahara REDUX has been under way for days. > > > > > > By the way, I sneaked another Sinfonia in without posting about it > > > here. http://tinyurl.com/2cvkcx8 > > > > Nice! > > > > Poly > > Thanks Poly. The points you make mean a lot. I've enjoyed listening to your music. Brings me back to the Wendy Carlos/Larry Fast Synergy days!! Poly
polymod wrote: > > "Benjamin Goldman" <> wrote in message > news:-september.org... > > polymod wrote: > > > > > > > > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message > > > news:-september.org... > > > > http://tinyurl.com/2dsgvcf > > > > I don't feel sure that I've finished this one. > > > > > > I like the mood of the piece. My only gripe is the 1-5-ocatve > > > thing gets stale after a while. It needs a "hava nagila" type > > > beat to kick it in gear at some point! > > > > Yep. I know what you mean all right. It is easier to deal with when > > played expressively on a piano. > > > > > > > > > My wife likes it but I need more critique. > > > > > > Well, if the wife likes it I'd leave it > > > Or change it and save the song under a different name > > > > > > > American Sahara REDUX has been under way for days. > > > > > > > > > By the way, I sneaked another Sinfonia in without posting about > > > > it here. http://tinyurl.com/2cvkcx8 > > > > > > Nice! > > > > > > Poly > > > > Thanks Poly. The points you make mean a lot. > > I've enjoyed listening to your music. Brings me back to the Wendy > Carlos/Larry Fast Synergy days!! > > Poly Tanks mon. -- On the flip-side, Ben
