"Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message news:-september.org... > By request. > http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9719285 Not bad. OK. What I think may be missing is some ornamental thingies....trills, grace notes...the things that you used in your Johann tunes. There's not enough variation away from the eighth note feel. And it needs more harmonic movement....maybe some temporary key changes to get away from the hanging around the tonic<g> just my .02 Poly
polymod was gettin' jiggy wit' it on 10/4/2010 at 12:51:11 PM and now feels very oogly boogly: > > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message > news:-september.org... > > By request. > > http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9719285 > > Not bad. > OK. What I think may be missing is some ornamental > thingies....trills, grace notes...the things that you used in your > Johann tunes. There's not enough variation away from the eighth note > feel. And it needs more harmonic movement....maybe some temporary key > changes to get away from the hanging around the tonic<g> > > just my .02 > > Poly > Thanks a lot, Poly. Much appreciated. -- On the flipside, BennyG
