Sinfonia No. 2 a la Moog

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  1. Ben Goldman Guest

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  2. polymod Guest

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    "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message
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    > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=music
    >
    > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it and
    > thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    >
    > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    >
    > Would love to hear what you think.


    I listened twice and still didn't catch it. I'd leave it!

    Nice job!

    Poly
  3. D.J.B Guest

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    Between about 00:55 and 01:01 - the left hand loses
    cohesion....

    Staccato notes overlap each other.. slight detuning,
    morphing... distortion,,,,

    Is that what you mean?

    The rest seems OK...

    DJB



    "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message
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    > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=music
    >
    > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it and
    > thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    >
    > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    >
    > Would love to hear what you think.
    >
    > --
    > On the flip-side,
    > BennyG
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    At 0:57 - - - OMG - the bass player gave birth to an alien!

    Nice work, very peaceful ... except for the ... was it an attempted trill ?

    S






    "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message news:-september.org...
    > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=music
    >
    > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it and
    > thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    >
    > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    >
    > Would love to hear what you think.
    >
    > --
    > On the flip-side,
    > BennyG
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  5. Steve_Karl Guest

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    Also, I don't know if it's a mistake since I don't have the chart, but I'd have written the
    B, A,G in the bass ( :05 to :06 ) as B, Ab, G ( if in a bold mood ) or Bb, Ab, G ( if being consdervative )

    S




    "Steve_Karl" <> wrote in message news:i9ruai$r2i$-september.org...
    > At 0:57 - - - OMG - the bass player gave birth to an alien!
    >
    > Nice work, very peaceful ... except for the ... was it an attempted trill ?
    >
    > S
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    > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message news:-september.org...
    >> It's at the bottom of this page:
    >> http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=music
    >>
    >> I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it and
    >> thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    >>
    >> I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    >>
    >> Would love to hear what you think.
    >>
    >> --
    >> On the flip-side,
    >> BennyG

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  6. Benjamin Goldman Guest

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    polymod wrote:

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    > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message
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    > > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=m
    > > usic
    > >
    > > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it
    > > and thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    > >
    > > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    > >
    > > Would love to hear what you think.

    >
    > I listened twice and still didn't catch it. I'd leave it!
    >
    > Nice job!
    >
    > Poly


    Tanks mon. :eek:)

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    Ben
  7. Benjamin Goldman Guest

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    D.J.B wrote:

    > Between about 00:55 and 01:01 - the left hand loses cohesion....
    >
    > Staccato notes overlap each other.. slight detuning,
    > morphing... distortion,,,,
    > Is that what you mean?
    >
    > The rest seems OK...
    >
    > DJB
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    > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message
    > news:-september.org...
    > > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=m
    > > usic
    > >
    > > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it
    > > and thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    > >
    > > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    > >
    > > Would love to hear what you think.
    > >
    > > -- On the flip-side,
    > > BennyG


    Nope. You're referring to the part where the left hand is doing an
    extended trill. Nothing wrong there at all.

    Thanks for listening.

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    Ben
  8. Benjamin Goldman Guest

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    Steve_Karl wrote:

    > At 0:57 - - - OMG - the bass player gave birth to an alien!
    >
    > Nice work, very peaceful ... except for the ... was it an attempted
    > trill ?
    >
    > S
    >
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    >
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    > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message
    > news:-september.org...
    > > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=m
    > > usic
    > >
    > > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it
    > > and thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    > >
    > > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    > >
    > > Would love to hear what you think.
    > >
    > > -- On the flip-side,
    > > BennyG


    The trills are perfect. Sometimes the patch being used will do
    interesting thing when rapidly trilled.

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    Ben
  9. Benjamin Goldman Guest

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    Steve_Karl wrote:

    > Also, I don't know if it's a mistake since I don't have the chart,
    > but I'd have written the B, A,G in the bass ( :05 to :06 ) as B, Ab,
    > G ( if in a bold mood ) or Bb, Ab, G ( if being consdervative )
    >
    > S
    >
    >
    >
    >
    > "Steve_Karl" <> wrote in message
    > news:i9ruai$r2i$-september.org...
    > > At 0:57 - - - OMG - the bass player gave birth to an alien!
    > >
    > > Nice work, very peaceful ... except for the ... was it an attempted
    > > trill ?
    > >
    > > S
    > >
    > >
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    > >
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    > >"Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message

    > news:-september.org...
    > > > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > > > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content
    > > > =music
    > > >
    > > > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies
    > > > it and thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    > > >
    > > > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    > > >
    > > > Would love to hear what you think.
    > > >
    > > > -- On the flip-side,
    > > > BennyG

    > >
    > >


    What can I say? Bach's a genius. ;) Keep in mind, this baroque piece
    was written in C Minor.

    Thanks for listening and nice comments. I also find it very peaceful.

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    Ben
  10. polymod Guest

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    "Benjamin Goldman" <> wrote in message
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    > Steve_Karl wrote:
    >
    > > At 0:57 - - - OMG - the bass player gave birth to an alien!
    > >
    > > Nice work, very peaceful ... except for the ... was it an attempted
    > > trill ?
    > >
    > > S
    > >
    > >
    > >
    > >
    > >
    > >
    > > "Ben Goldman" <> wrote in message
    > > news:-september.org...
    > > > It's at the bottom of this page:
    > > > http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1105877&content=m
    > > > usic
    > > >
    > > > I made a small mistake in the left hand. If somebody identifies it
    > > > and thinks it's a bad one, I may redo this recording.
    > > >
    > > > I kind of like the mistake but have some doubt.
    > > >
    > > > Would love to hear what you think.
    > > >
    > > > -- On the flip-side,
    > > > BennyG

    >
    > The trills are perfect. Sometimes the patch being used will do
    > interesting thing when rapidly trilled.


    So.....where's the clam?
    ;)

    Poly
  11. Benjamin Goldman Guest

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    polymod wrote:

    > So.....where's the clam?
    > ;)
    >
    > Poly


    At 0:22 the left hand is supposed repeat the previous figure at 0:17 to
    0:19 but a step lower - it's missing a note. ;)

    I've redone it and it only lacks production work. It's doing pretty
    well on the charts so I may keep the redo for the album.

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    Cheers,
    Ben
  12. polymod Guest

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    "Benjamin Goldman" <> wrote in message
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    > polymod wrote:
    >
    > > So.....where's the clam?
    > > ;)
    > >
    > > Poly

    >
    > At 0:22 the left hand is supposed repeat the previous figure at 0:17 to
    > 0:19 but a step lower - it's missing a note. ;)


    Ah yes!

    > I've redone it and it only lacks production work. It's doing pretty
    > well on the charts so I may keep the redo for the album.


    Good luck with it Ben!

    Poly
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