The Lost Rose - My first Composition

Discussion in 'My Music' started by mvshabeer, Jul 7, 2011.

  1. mvshabeer New Member

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    HI,

    I would like to share my first composition with you. C&C are welcome

    mvshabeer, Jul 7, 2011
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  2. Iain New Member

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    Sounds good when the floral staircase appeared was thinking that a choir would have been nice
    Iain, Jul 11, 2011
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  3. goldi5210 New Member

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    Hej, hej Mvshabeer,

    I like your composition very much. It's for me a mixture between romantic and melancholy. I would propose to give the strings a little, just a little sustain.

    What instrument did you use for this piece?
    goldi5210, Jul 12, 2011
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  4. Robot Band New Member

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    This is beautiful! And very melodic.
    Robot Band, Jul 13, 2011
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  5. mroller New Member

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    Beautifully done. A nice balance between the instruments.
    mroller, Oct 20, 2011
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