Another one of my songs

[Jeremykeys]

This one is called Workin' Too Hard. As usual, I play all of the instruments and sing all of the parts. I lay down the drum tracks by finger drumming on my Korg Nanopad 2. I usually use about 4 tracks in Cubase 'cause I'm not very good at it!
Have a listen and please let me know what you think.
While you're at it, feel free to check out other songs of mine too.
Have fun!

https://soundcloud.com/jeremykeys/workin-too-hard

 

[happyrat1]

The instrumentals are flawless. Good rockin' tune.

I'm not a fan of the vocals though. They're way too clean and I can hear you straining on the high notes.

I think it would have worked better if you had a rasp in your voice or a baritone growl. Maybe try it with a distortion effect on the vocals or smoke a pack of camels before the recording

Otherwise though, good lyrics and and good music.

Gary

 

[Rayblewit]

Great sound!
I was playing it loud and my wife in the next room yells out . "Is that Dire Straits?"
Lol
"I like that" she said.
I do too.
Cheers ray

 

[Gastaogas]

I listened and I liked it, good music. Continue is always good to listen to songs produced with affection. Gastão / Brasil