I need an Honest Answer on what to improve. I compose this Relaxing & Deep Sleep Music for Quarantine


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Hello,

I'm happy to be part of these wonderful forums. I have a knee interest to learn more as my career progresses.

I would love some feedback on this my music.


Looking forward to an honest response.
 
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happyrat1

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The bits I listened to sounded technically OK, but it's not really my genre of music.

Don't expect a lot of people here to audition the whole track though.

33 minutes of lifetime is a lot to ask of a passing stranger.

Would YOU stand with me and listen for a half hour if I asked you to hear the word of Jehova? Or better yet, Satan??? :D :D :D

Gary ;)
 
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Welcome.

Like Gary and Ray, I listened to snippets.

I actually found the first section grating in tone, it is to repetitive for my taste and the instrument choice would be better with one which has a more softer tone which would be more in keeping with the theme of the piece.

Moving on the remainder is quite good and you hit the target for the type of music that you have aimed the piece at.

No doubt you have really enjoyed creating the piece and hats off to you for offering it up to us for critique.

Best wishes
 
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Rayblewit

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Actually, @humpee You slipped through the net; under the radar so to speak!
I am surprised that this music vid of yours even got through the system.
By rights, as you have only just joined us, you are supposed to pass protocol of certain criteria before posting this.
You are lucky to get the response you asked for.
I trust you appreciate that.
Anyway I welcome you. And I trust you will contribute to the discussions.
cheers Ray
 

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